Best advertisement in class

Thomas's advertisement
Target audience: Smoker
For: To make smokers stop smoking.
How is it effective: It shows how addicrive cigarrete could be and how it changes your mind.

What would you prefer?

I would prefer having the ability of getting answers, honestly and ask whatever I want, in any time. Rather than lying. I think lying is a really bad habit, when you get answers honestly, you get to know more about yourself. And know how to change how you act. Also, that means you could read their minds. You actually do, because you practically ask everything you want about them, and you get honest answers. It is just awesome. You get to know what your sister wants and I guess be close sisters, not like seperated. Anyway getting answers, honestly and ask whatever you want is better than LYING

Gymnastic Competition 25/5/10

Last Saturday, I had a Gymnastic competition. This is a competition that happens the end of every season. I was so nervous, that my legs were shaking. I was in the second session with Micheal's sister, Melissa, Elise, Jade and Emma Fukar. My group first had Beam. I was so glad that we had beam, because it was my favorite. We did our routine one by one and moved on to Floor. We did various jumps and turns like handstand, cartwheel and kick with jump. After that, we ran to Vault. Vault was the easiest. Everyone did fine with Vault. We had a 10 min rest for us to drink and take a break. After that, we had bar. Bar was the hardest for me. My hands get sweaty a lot that I slip really easily. So I had to put a lot of flour, and then start. I did bar the worst from the Group. After that we had a medal ceremony. This is when you get to know your scores and how well you did. For Vault, I got second place. Beam, I got first. Floor, I got second. Bar I did third. And guess what???? I won the overall, tied with Emma Fukar. I was so happy, because Emma is really good, and won the overall last time. I was so glad that I got the same score as Emma. It was such a honour. hahaha :P. Anyway, right after that I took a drink and quickly went home with my DAD.
THE END

Jonas's journal

Today was a terrible day, not just any terribles, but this one was out there. During the twelve ceremony, the Chief called everyone's number to assign them, in order. When Chief called Fiona, I knew exactly what it was, Old taker. I didn't know what I would get, not a clue. When it was time to call my number, she just, she just SKIPPED ME.

Clio Award advertisement deconstruction

Target- EVERYONE
- Clio awarded this advertisement, because it affects peoples' feeling from happy to sad. Also makes childrens' think they're lucky, and make them think back about how they acted before to children with poverty.

-Elements
Symbolism-Computer box, that's been thrown away
Body language- Children lying down inside the box like it's their home
Camera angle- There is to give a highlight on the kids and the box.
Special Language- None

Slighting and colour- Dark colour that makes your mood down
Beauty and social standing- None
layout and graphic- Old picture style

Advertise- persuasive writing 2

20 year old boy

- style
- new
- girl

Want to drive through that snow with a hot new looks? Snowy is where you should look. Get loads of attention from those ladies, waiting for you. Be cool, look cool, stay cool. Snowy is the right snow board for you,

Advertise- Persuasive writing : 20 YEAR OLD GUY

Your old snowboard just broke down? Well buy a new one in 'Snowy'. We sell snowboards which are professionaly designed for you. If you don't like it, make your design with a top grafitti designer. Get a special 60% discout and a free coupon for the 'World Wide Snowboarding' contest. Get the snowboards now in SNOWY.

Revision: The giver 20 word summary

They have strict rules, releasing. Commmunity has dinner, the time to share feelings. The world with no animals. What happened?

The giver : 20 word summary

This is the future and the past. This book has some communities and different rules. No winter, and animals.